Thursday, March 29, 2007

sentence variations

Sentence variations

  1. Plane crashes into building (START)
  • An aeroplane collided into an HDB flat on Monday afternoon at Summer Valley. According to investigations, it was believed to be caused by an initial explosion at its tail. (O:Sà 99: 1)
  • It was a peaceful Monday afternoon at Summer Valley. Suddenly, I saw an aeroplane tumbling down from the sky and crashing into an HDB building! (O:S à 30 : 70)
  • A loud explosion was heard. After which, I saw an aeroplane crashing into an HDB building. It happened on Monday afternoon at Summer Valley.(O:Sà 45 : 55)
  • An explosion was heard first before the aeroplane lost control and collided into an HDB building. The incident took place on Monday afternoon at Summer Valley. (O:Sà 90:10)

  1. Car accident (START)
  • A car accident took place on Monday afternoon at Summer Valley Road. One of the cars was flipped over when it was hit. (O:S à 99:1)
  • Two cars collided into each other at a traffic light junction near Summer Valley Road on Monday afternoon. It happened when one car tried to brake in vain and crashed into an oncoming car. (O:S à 90:10)
  • Traffic was running smoothly at Summer Valley Road when suddenly, screeching sounds of tyres could be heard. Two cars had crashed into each other. The accident took place on Monday afternoon. (O:S à 65:35)
  • A car accident happened at Summer Valley Road on Monday afternoon. It was the worse car accident that I have ever seen. One of the cars was flipped over. (O:Sà 30:70)

  1. Car Accident (middle part)
  • Just as the plane crashed, a car accident took place simultaneously. Two cars crashed into each other at a traffic light road junction. (O:S à 99:1)
  • As the plane crashed, screeching sounds of tyres can be heard. It dawned on me that two cars had crashed into each other nearby a traffic light road junction. (O:S à 25: 75)
  • Amidst the chaos and confusion caused by the plane crash, a car accident took place at a nearby road junction. (O:Sà 60:40)
  • Near the crash site, a car tried to brake in vain and crashed into an oncoming car. One of the cars was flipped over when it was hit. (O:S à 70:30)

  1. Car swerves into shophouse with man (after plane crash & capture both)
  • Just as the plane crashed, a bad accident took place simultaneously. A car swerves and crashed into a shophouse. One man was knocked down and the car was badly damaged. (O:Sà 70:30)
  • As the plane crashed, screeching sounds of tyres can be heard. It dawned on me that a car has knocked down a man and crashed into a shophouse. (O:Sà 35:65)
  • Amidst the chaos and confusion caused by the plane crash, a car knocked down a man, who was sitting in front of shophouse, and crashed into it. (O:Sà 60:40)
  • Near the crash site, a car tried to brake in vain and knocked down a man who was in front of a shophouse, in which it crashed into thereafter. (O:Sà 80:20)

  1. Car swerves into shophouse with man (only capture car crash into shophouse, after plane crash)
  • Soon after the plane crashed into the building, loud horn and braking sounds could be heard. Then, a loud crash would be heard from a nearby shophouse. It was then I realized that a car had crashed into a shophouse while trying to avoid a man. (O:Sà 10:90)
  • Soon after the plane crashed into the building, a car crashed into a nearby shophouse. It was reported that the car was trying to avoid knocking down a man. Therefore, it had accidentally swerved into the shophouse. (O:Sà 90:10)
  • A car lost control and swerved into the shophouse right after the plane collided into a building nearby. It seemed to be a day full of crashing accidents! (O:Sà 55:45)
  • A car smashed into a shophouse after a plane collided into a building. It was said to be that the driver lost control of the car. Luckily, no one was seriously injured. (O:Sà 70:30)

  1. Car swerves into shophouse with man (only capture knock down man, after plane crash)
  • After the plane crashed into the building, another accident happened nearby. A car lost control and knocked down a man, who did not notice the incoming speeding car. The extent of injury was not known yet. (O:Sà 90:10)
  • As everyone was still trying to maintain control of what happened during the plane crash, another tragedy took place nearby the crash site. A car knocked down an unsuspecting man! Screeching sounds and horning sounds were heard to warn the man unsuccessfully. (O:Sà 65:35)
  • When everyone’s attention was still on the plane incident, a car lost control, swerved right into a man and knocked him down! (O:Sà 45:55)
  • Suddenly, I heard the sound of tyres screeching and the blasting of car horns when I was still trying to focus and make sense of what happened during the plane crash. (O:Sà 20:80)

  1. Car swerves into shophouse (after car knocks onto car scene, capture both car and man, either or too!)
  • One accident happened after another. Soon after the two cars collided, another car accident took place nearby. A car had swerved into the shophouse, during which a man was knocked down. (O:Sà 90:10)
  • Another accident happened nearby the car accident. A car had knocked down a man who was sitting in front of a shophouse. It tried to avoid him and end up smashing directly into the shophouse. (O:Sà 80:20)
  • It was not long before another car mishap took place. A car could not brake in time and knocked down a man. When trying to avoid him, it ended up crashing into the shophouse. (O:Sà 60:40)
  • After walking away from the car accident scene, I witnessed another misfortune. Swerving unsuccessfully to avoid a man who was in front of a shophouse, a car smashed into it. (O:Sà 30:60)

  1. Car swerves into shophouse (after car knock onto car scene, capture only car knocks into building)
  • After walking away from the car accident scene, I witnessed another car mishap. A car smashed into a shophouse. It was reported that the brake was not working properly. (O:Sà 35:65)
  • It was not long before another car accident happened. It was alleged that a car could not brake in time and smashed right into the shophouse. Some of the car parts were seen flying off. (O:Sà 70:30)
  • Nearby, another car had smashed into a shophouse. It was reported that the car seemed to be lost in control and veered right into the shophouse. The car was badly damaged. A few car parts were missing. (O:Sà 85:15)
  • Just after the car accident, another car was reported to have smashed right into the shophouse. Investigations were still being conducted. (O:Sà 99:1)

  1. Car swerves into shophouse (after car knock onto car scene, capture only man got knocked down by car)
  • Nearby, a car knocked down a man who was sitting in front of a shophouse. It was reported that the brakes of the car was not functioning properly. (O:Sà 99:1)
  • As I was walking away from the car accident site, I witnessed a car swerving and knocking down a man. But it did not stop and continued to drive off. It was a hit-and-run case. (O:Sà 40:60)
  • Soon after the car accident, a man was knocked down by a car, which drove off after that. Investigations were still being conducted. (O:Sà70:30)
  • In another place, a man was knocked down by a car. It was reported that the car suddenly swerved into the man and knocked him down. Investigations were still being conducted. (O:Sà90:10)

  1. Man jumping off building (after plane crash)
  • It was witnessed that after the plane crashed, a man jumped off a building in a desperate attempt to save his life. (O:Sà 80:20)
  • It was witnessed that after the plane crashed, a man jumped off a building. It was said that he was griefing over the loss of his son, who was believed to be piloting the aeroplane. (O:Sà 70:30)
  • A man jumped off a building after the plane crashed. What a waste of a human life! (O:Sà 55:45)
  • There was fire and smoke everywhere. Suddenly, a man was falling off the building. It was believed that he could not see where he was going, missed his footing and fell off. (O:Sà 60:40)
  • A man was also said to have fallen off a building not long after the plane collided into the building. Reports showed that it could have been as accident as there was smoke everywhere and the visibility was bad. (O:Sà 90:10)
  • A man was also said to have committed suicide not long after the place crash incident. It was alleged that the man’s son was piloting the plane, and thus, he jumped off the building in grief. (O:Sà 75:25)

  1. Police helps (after car swerves)
  • The police arrived soon after the car accident. One police officer immediately ran to the injured man and tended to him till the ambulance arrived. The man was reported to be suffering from a few broken bones but in a stable condition. (must see injured man) (O:Sà 95:5)
  • The casualty lay on the ground, unmoving. It was not known if he survived until a police officer came and announced that he was still alive but was seriously injured. (must see the injured man) (O:Sà 90:10)
  • No one was near the accident site when it took place. Luckily, a police car happened to pass by, and a police officer went to help. The only serious casualty was a man who was knocked down by the car. The police officer helped to tend to his wounds while waiting for more help to arrive. (must see the injured man) (O:Sà 75:25)
  • Although a police officer arrived at the scene in a few minutes, the injured man died of blood loss, despite the fact that the police tried to stop the bleeding as best as he could. (can see or don’t see the injured man) (O:Sà 85:15)
  • Everything happened so quickly! I saw one police officer running towards the accident site. He checked to make sure that the car driver was fine before he went to check on the knocked down casualty. (can see or do not see the injured man) (O:Sà 40:60)
  • Upon seeing the car accident, a police officer immediately dashed to the injured man. His quick reaction was commended by the public. (can see or don’t see the injured man) (O:Sà 70:30)
  • The car was damaged badly. Bits and pieces of the car were torn apart when it crashed into the shophouse. The police came soon after and made sure that everyone stayed clear of the accident site. (without the injured man) (O:Sà90:10)
  • No one was near the accident site when it took place. Luckily, a police car happened to pass by, and a police officer went to help. The car was damaged but the driver suffered only a few scratches. (no injured man) (O:Sà 60:40)
  • Fortunately, there was a police officer who was on duty nearby. He dashed to the accident site as fast as he could. There was one casualty and he was sent to the hospital for treatment. No news about the extent of his injury yet from the hospital staff. (without the injured man) (O:Sà 55:45)

  1. Police helps (after man jumps off building)
  • A police officer ran to check on the man right after this tragedy. Unfortunately, the man did not survive his fall. (more for cannot see and accidentally fall off) (O:Sà 75:25)
  • A police officer ran to the suicide spot and checked on the man. It was reported that he died on the spot. (suicide case) (O:Sà99:1)
  • A police officer ran to check on the man immediately. He tended to his wound while waiting for the ambulance to arrive. (see injured man) (O:Sà90:10)
  • The man lay on the ground, unmoving. It was not known if he survived until a police officer came and announced that he was still alive but was seriously injured. (must see the injured man) (O:Sà 70:30)
  • Luckily, there was a police officer on duty nearby. He dashed to the fallen man and tended to his wound immediately. The man suffered serious injury but in stable condition. (see injured man) (O:Sà 60:40)
  • Although a police officer arrived at the scene in a few minutes, the injured man died of blood loss, despite the fact that the police tried to stop the bleeding as best as he could. (can see or don’t see the injured man) (O:Sà 60:40)
  • Upon seeing the man falling down the building, a police officer ran towards him immediately. He tried to revive him but in vain. It was said that the man died of severe brain damage. (can see or don’t see injured man) (O:Sà 80:20)

  1. Plane tilts and crashes onto ground (last last scene, after car swerves into shophouse)
  • Just as we all thought that the situation was under control, the plane suddenly swayed and tilted dangerously. (haven fall yet) (O:Sà30:70)
  • Suddenly, a metallic creaking sound was heard. I turned my head and realized that the plane was swaying dangerously on top of the building! (haven fallen yet) (O:Sà10:90)
  • When everyone’s focus was still on the car crash, a metal creaking sound was heard. It dawned on them that the plane was tilting over the building dangerously. Not long after, it crashed onto the ground with an explosion. (O:Sà40:60)
  • Just as everyone on the accident site thought that everything was under control, a loud explosive crash alarmed them. It was later realized that the plane had tilted over the building and crashed onto the ground. (O:Sà 55:45)
  • All of a sudden, a loud crash was heard. Everyone was startled as they thought that nothing worse could have happened. The plane had crashed onto the ground. (O:Sà 45:55)
  • The plane was swaying on top of the crashed building. Soon after, it tilted backwards and smashed onto the ground with a loud crash. (O:Sà70:30)

  1. Plane tilts and crashed onto the ground ( after man jump off building)
  • Everyone’s attention was shifted back to the plane when it started to sway dangerously at the top of the building. Eerie creaking sounds could be heard clearly and soon after, the plane tilted over and smashed to the ground. There was no further casualty as the place was condoned off right after it collided into the building. (tilting and crashed could be shown) (O:Sà 55:45)
  • No one noticed that the plane was already swaying dangerously. Everyone’s attention was now on the fallen man. When the plane crashed to the ground with a loud bang, it alarmed them. (tilting and crashed could be shown) (O:Sà 40:60)
  • As soon as the man jumped off the building, a tremendous crash could be heard concurrently. I realized that the plane had crashed to the ground! There was no further casualty as the place was condoned off right after it collided into the building. (no tilting of the plane shown) (O:Sà20:80)
  • As soon as the man fell off the building, a tremendous crash could be heard concurrently. I realized that the plane had crashed to the ground! There was no further casualty as the place was condoned off right after it collided into the building. (no tilting of the plane shown) (O:Sà 20:80)
  • Right after the man felled to the ground, loud creaking metallic sounds could be heard clearly. It was soon discovered that the plane was about to tilt over the building as its weight leaned to one side. (only tilting shown) (O:Sà 65:35)
  • Without warning, loud metallic sounds was heard clearly. A witnessed reported that the plane was tilted over the building and swaying as its weight leaned to one side gradually. (only tilting only) (O:Sà 80:20)

  1. Man and woman quarrel and robbery (after car knocks onto car)
  • Soon after the car accident, I saw a man and woman quarreling under a tree. They seemed to be in a heated argument when suddenly, the man grabs the woman’s bag and ran off. (O:Sà20:80)
  • I was at the car accident when I saw a man and woman quarreling under a tree. They seemed to be in a heated argument when suddenly, the man grabs the woman’s bag and ran off. (O:Sà 20:80)
  • Nearby the car accident, a man and woman was quarreling under a tree. Soon after, the man suddenly grabbed her bag and dashed off with it. (O:Sà 80:20)
  • I was at the car accident when I saw a robbery took place nearby. A man snatched the bag of a woman and ran off. (no quarreling scene, only robbery scene) (O:Sà 30:70)
  • Soon after the car accident, I saw a couple in a heated argument. They seemed oblivious of what was happening around them. (only quarrel scene) (O:Sà 10:90)
  • Nearby the car accident, a man and woman was quarreling under a tree. The reason for the dispute was not known. (only the quarrel scene) (O:Sà90:10)
  • Just as everyone’s attention was on the car accident, a lady screamed for help. A man had robbed her handbag. It was alleged to contain thousands worth of value inside. (robbery scene only) (O:Sà 80:20)
  • Suddenly, a lady shouted for help. It was reported that a man had grabbed her bag and ran off with it. (only robbery scene) (O:Sà75:25)

  1. Police chases robber
  • A police officer, who was nearby when the robbery took place, reacted immediately and gave chase. He finally caught the robber and brought him back to the station. The bag was safely returned to the owner without loss. (O:Sà75:25)
  • A police officer saw the robbery and chased the thief immediately. He managed to catch the latter within a few minutes. The bag was returned to the owner without loss. (O:Sà 85:15)
  • As soon as the thief escaped with the bag, a police officer immediately gave chase. The thief was caught in a matter of seconds, and the bag was returned safely. (O:Sà 80:20)
  • I was at the scene of the car accident when I saw a police officer chasing a man. I was later told that the man had snatched a lady’s bag. The police officer caught the man and brought him back to the station. (O:Sà 35:65)

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