Story Builder Interface

Hey guys... been working on the interface for the storybuilder. not too sure if it's ok (or doable). Tried to make it as simple as possible while trying to give the player a feel of it (and not make him feel like he's navigating through the whole thing instead of playing.

Donny suggested putting the gallery for photos at the end, so i've tried to do something along those lines. Basically at the end of a level, the player will be brought to the screen with the gallery of all his photos, where he can pick a maximum of say, 4 possible photos. Once they've been picked the player will move to the "Article" screen, where the bulk of it is supposed to look like a newspaper (a fully laid-out front page) where the photo and sentence selection will create the main front page article. the rest of the text is blurred out cos they're not important).

anyway, here's a pic:

The one at the top is the photo gallery and the one at the bottom is the article thing. hope it makes sense. Incidentally if you're wondering why there's a whole range of blanks in the middle, its because i just wanted to illustrate the that the screen could fit 4 rows of 6 pictures each.